关于踢足球打篮球打乒乓球赛跑跳高打排球的英语短文?

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"My father enjoys playing soccer, my mother enjoys playing basketball, my brother enjoys playing ping-pong, while my sister enjoys playing volleyball, but I prefer running and high jumping."

  1. Added "enjoys" instead of "like", which is the correct past tense form to indicate enjoyment.
  2. Changed "play" to "playing" for all sports mentioned in the original text as it is the general word for engaging in physical activity.
  3. Rephrased "but" to "while" as it naturally connects the activities with the person who enjoys them better.
  4. Adopted the present tense form "prefer" to indicate preference over other activities.
  5. Reworded the sentence structure to be more concise by combining the subject (My father, mother, brother, sister) and action verbs (running and high jumping).
  6. Used过渡词 "while" to connect each sport mentioned in the list.
  7. Ensured that there are no extraneous punctuation or capitalization changes to maintain readability.
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